Friday, 28 April 2017

Don't Forget Me - Reflective Analysis

My screenplay is calledDont Forget About Meand takes place in New York, 2001. Georgie has just got back from a morning shop and is about to take a pregnancy test as her boyfriend, Jacob, phones her unexpectedly as his plane has been hijacked. My screenplay is titledDont Forget About Mebecause Georgie will end up having his child and as the viewer we dont know if Jacob heard Georgie tell him that she was pregnant. Either way, he doesnt want to be forgotten which is a line mentioned in the screenplay as he saysDont you all go forgetting me too quickly will you?’

My screenplay has been inspired by films such as The Impossible and United 93. The Impossible tells the story of a family separated by a natural disaster who fight the odds to find each other again, it is based on real events. The United 93 is a film about the plane that was hijacked, but the passengers on the plane fought back and redirected the plane away from the building it was originally meant to hit, this is also based on real life events and the historical event that Don’t Forget About Me is based on, however the characters are fictional.

The location of my screenplay is New York because it helps to show all angles of the 9/11 attacks, enabling me to show Georgie’s reaction in her apartment as well as the general public’s reaction as the action takes place outside of her apartment. I also decided to include Jacob’s view point from the inside of the plane so that the audience could really see the drama building up and the effect that it was having on the people inside of the plane. This was highly inspired by the previously mentioned film The United 93. Having both locations of the apartment and the plane made the last conversation that Georgie and Jacob a lot harder hitting because as an audience we would be able to see the other people on the plane as well as how Jacob is coping with what is going on, while we would intercut with Georgie to see her ever growing emotions.

I decided that Georgie shouldn’t get the chance to tell Jacob that she is pregnant because it creates a more painful outcome for the audience who already know that she is pregnant and they would want Jacob to know before anything bad may happen to him. As the line cuts out midsentence and all she is able to say is ‘I’m preg-’this will cause the audience to question whether Jacob may have heard any of the sentence or none at all. I also thought that for Georgie to actually be able to hear the impact of the plane on the World Trade Centre would make the whole situation feel a lot more real to her as well as the audience who would be watching in anticipation.

The main message of my screenplay is ‘living life in the moment,’ this is because most people do take the people in their everyday lives for granted. Like the saying ‘you don’t know what you have until it’s gone’ a real life message that the main character of the film Georgie will feel the effects of. This message can be seen when Georgie realises she is losing Jacob, her boyfriend, who she has previously spoken highly of saying that he would support her through a pregnancy if need be, but then things take a turn for the worst when he phones up saying that his planes been hijacked and he doesn’t know if he will make it home.

My primary target audience would be young adults who are starting to make their own ways in the world, whether this is through further education or starting their careers. This is because they would be able to relate to the main character a lot more as they would be roughly in the same age group as her and may even be able to put themselves in her situation. My secondary target audience would be people who enjoy heart breaking romantic films due to the painful storyline that occurs though out the screenplay. This film may also appeal to a more serious audience who are interested in real life events due to the context of the screenplay. The final product may be shown as film festivals.

I believe that the audience of my screenplay would be able to relate to this message because in this day and age where terrorism is a current threat, where no one really truly knows when the last goodbye will be. The fact that the two main characters in this film are both young with bright happy futures ahead of them who have their lives mapped out, will really put into perspective to the audience about how quickly certain things can change. Georgie and Jacob aren’t special people, they are the average couple that you may see around on a daily basis making the story between them a lot harder hitting and realistic for the audience so that they can feel the emotions of the characters with a lot more detail.


Don't Forget Me


Don’t Forget Me - Screenplay
FADE IN:
EXT: OUTSIDE IN SUMMIT ROCK, CENTRAL PARK. DAY.
There is a montage showing Summit Rock in Central Park and the apartments West of the park. These shots show families and friends bonding in the sunlight while business men and woman go about their daily lives of getting to work. The final shot focuses on a plane flying over the park which tilts down to the apartment of GEORGIE and JACOB, a basic apartment quite high up.

INT: THE INSIDE OF GEORGIE AND JACOB’S APPARTMENT. DAY.
The camera begins focussed on GEORGIE (a young woman who appears content with life) who can be seen wandering from her front door with bags full of her weekly shopping, she places them down in her kitchen and turns on her favourite CD by Kelly Clarkson. She searches through her bags to find her phone and a pregnancy test, beginning to read the instructions on the box as she walks towards a picture of her boyfriend JACOB (a young fit man) on their mantel piece, flicking her eyes back to the pregnancy test before smiling at JACOB’s picture once more, then heads to the bathroom. GEORGIE places her phone on the window ledge, completes the pregnancy test steps and places it beside her phone, running herself a hot bath as she waits for the result. Her dog TREVOR walks in, wagging his tail with glee before sitting proudly next to his owner gazing at GEORGIE through his big eyes almost questioning what she is doing.
GEORGIE
(Calmly)
I guess it doesn’t matter what the result is aye TREVOR.
[PAUSE]
(Georgie starts to pour bubble liquid into her bath and mixing it into the water before drying her hands, then looks at TREVOR.)
We have enough money…I could give up my job… he does earn enough money for all of us…but then again it’s going to be negative so what does it matter anyway? But what if it’s not? What if he’s not happy with the result? What if-
(GEORGIE stops herself mid-sentence and looks at TREVOR beginning to pet him) 
I need to stop worrying Trevor, don’t I. I’m being stupid again. Ah, if Jacob was here now he would tell me I’m having another Georgie moment, we don’t even know the result yet, so why worry?
(TREVOR wags his tail excitedly as he is getting more attention from GEROGIE)
I’ve missed Jacob, I bet you have too. He’s always giving you more treats than you deserve hey! (In a childish voice) Yes he is! Oh yes he is! (With a more serious tone) What would we do without him, our knight in shining arm-
GEORGIE ‘s phone starts to ring and we can see that ‘JACOB’ is calling her. TREVOR jumps at the noise and begins to bark. Seeming surprised at her caller she grabs her phone and flips it open while trying to stop TREVOR from barking. Shouting and cries can be heard through the phone. GEORGIE’s eyes widen, questioning and thinking about every reason he could be calling her and what all the commotion is in the background.

GEORGIE
Hello?
CUT
INT: INSIDE OF A PLANE. DAY.
JACOB can be seen clutching a phone to his face with a concerned expression. Other passengers on the plane can be seen behind him crying and shouting, some others on phones, others clutching loved ones next to them. Air hostess’ on the plane are walking up and down the aisles at speed trying to reassure their passengers. There is a lot of background noise from the plane’s engine.
JACOB
(Hesitantly)
Hey, look…I need you to listen to me very carefully okay? I’m-
CUT
INT: THE INSIDE OF A BATHROOM. DAY.
The steam from the hot water running in the bath has overtaken the room as GEORGIE has forgotten about the bath, concentrating on her phone call and trying to tune into the background noises that can be heard through the phone as a thousand thoughts cross her mind about what could possibly be going on. TREVOR finally stops barking as GEORGIE gives him a stern look.
GEORGIE
(Confused)
What’s going on? Where are you?

JACOB (through phone)
I don’t want you to panic okay, everything will be okay, but the plane I’m on has been hijacked.
GEROGIE
(In a disgusted tone) In this some kind of joke? It’s not funny Ja-
JACOB
(Assertive) No, please, I’m not joking, listen to me okay?

(GEORGIE’S face drops and she sinks to the bathroom floor unable to stand from shock. Overcome with emotions her eyes start to well up. TREVOR excitedly tries to climb over GEORGIE but is stopped by her legs creating a barrier.)      

JACOB (through phone)
 Please, please, please do not panic, I just needed to hear your voice. I love you Georgie. (Starts to cry)
[PAUSE]
GEORGIE
(GEORGIE looks down at her pregnancy test that she has previously taken and we can see that the result is positive. As she sees the result her teary eyes begin to pour out like waterfalls in panic. She looks up to the ceiling in an attempt to compose herself to talk to JACOB. TREVOR starts to pine for GEORGIES attention.)

(Desperately)
Please… come home to me… I need you. Can you please tell me what’s happening?
CUT
INT: INSIDE OF PLANE. DAY.
Passengers around JACOB have started to hang up on calls while others are frantically trying to call other loved ones, a few male passengers have gathered towards the back of the plane. There is a lot less conversation, and more crying.  
JACOB
Look, honey I don’t know if I will… make it… no one knows what is actually going on, the air hostess’ have no information to give us. Some of the guys want to plan an attack to get control back. But I promise you, no matter what happens to me… you’ll be okay, you have my savings, you can move on, create a new life without me, I won’t be annoyed… I love you please always remember that.
[PAUSE]
Georgie, you made my life great okay? I appreciate everything that you’ve ever done for me I’m sorry I never showed you that enough… I took you forgra-
GEORGIE (through phone)
(Urgently)
Stop… please… you always showed me how much I meant to you, stop talking like this, you’ll make it back to me, you have to! You can’t leave us behind. What do you even mean you don’t know what’s going on?

JACOB
(Jokingly with an exhale of air)
Interrupting me even now are we?
(Now more serious)
Hey, you will all be fine okay? Please pass on my love… my love to my family…
(Adding more of a joke)
Don’t you all go forgetting me too quickly will you?
CUT
INT: INSIDE OF THE BATHROOM. DAY.
GEORGIE is noticeably a lot more stressed, with one hand gripped onto the phone, one stuck on the pregnancy test. TREVOR is still trying to get through to GEORGIE, becoming more and more desperate the more GEORGIE looks distressed.
GEORGIE
How could you even say that?
JACOB (through phone)
Oh Georgie. You’re so perfect. You’re sweet innocent smiles. I will miss your dimples you know.
GEORGIE
Jacob please stop talking like this you’ll make it home, you have to!
JACOB (through phone)
Has something happened? Is everything okay with you?
GEORGIE
No Jacob, I mean… I’m pre-
A loud bang can be heard in the distance as the plane JACOB is on hits the first World Trade Centre building. The phone line cuts out and silence overtakes GEORGIE in her bathroom, with only the running water audible. GEORGIE’S eyes widen as she pieces together the bang with the fact that JACOB’s line cutting out may be linked. The bang frightened TREVOR who tried to bury himself in the corner of the room momentarily.
GEORGIE
(Still clutching her phone) Jacob?
GEORGIE picks herself up and runs out of her bathroom to her apartment window that overlooks the famous New York skyline, closely followed by a scared TREVOR who is continuously barking still. A large cloud of smoke can be seen filling the sky surrounding the World Trade Centre building. GEORGIE now knows that it was JACOB’s plane that hit the building.
GEORGIE
(Extremely distressed) Oh god no
GEORGIE begins to crying hysterically as she collapses helplessly on her living room floor, her hand dragging down the window, screaming out for Jacob to answer his phone. TREVOR finally manages to break through GEROGIE’s barrier and clambers onto her, licking her and trying to give her comfort. GEORGIE drops her phone before throwing her arms over her face and letting out a loud distressed cry. The final shot shows a long shot of a sobbing GEORGIE with TREVOR in her arms and the burning building in the background.
FADE TO OPENING CREDITS FOR DON’T FORGET ME.

(Copyright Grace Pye 2016)